Wednesday, 7 November 2012

The So(ur)real drop!!


On a rainy mid- day,
Alighted besides a breezy window.
My arms gave a mild sway-
Ignorant, what will follow!!

A rolling drop fall from heaven,
Touched so sharp my index tip.
An electron flush passing on-
Pulled me in with a easy flip.

A crystal jar or a glassy wall,
My eyes exclaimed in jarring jolt.
Deluged me that water ball
With no clue; where will i halt!!

A dirty puddle, floor or feet
On what or which will I shatter?
Winced and whined my heart beat.
But happened then is good so better.

On a blooming bud it slowly launched,
Pleasing smell and dashing hue;
Chilled and thrilled; fully drenched;
Winked I twice, to feel it true!

To end with bash, the bouncing glee-
Came ringing loud a dirty bee.
Gasped and jumped the mixed up me,
This dream I had is still so new!!

2 comments:

ankit_shroff said...

The words used were good but the flow was not streamlined. I had to think to understand the concept. It will slowly improve.

sowee said...

thanx na :) sure...