What am I different?
Asked me to all.
Abyss my mind had no hint
Colder was I, than the diamond fall.
Am a glitch of a man-maker;
People call me insane;
See me with bizarre;
Well, baffled on what is sane!
Clandestine hoarded to my heart.
Bliss is all I have felt;
I will tell them not
For, they are all different!
3 comments:
A little tweaking of words will help to enhance the effect. For example, the first line can be only 'Am i different', instead of 'what am i different'.
sure na thanx for the suggestns :)
but i felt "what" wu add more sharpness to the question na.. to be true... i first wrote it as u suggested :)
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